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The Nice Devil

  • Nov 30, 2025
  • 14 min read



                                                   


In a dimension both far and near, one in which they could see you, but you could not see them, and you had never had from your own dimension. They watch from abandoned places, but some interfere and drag the weak from here to hell by simply communicating with them through their brain's frontal lobe. They ignore God's orders and their instincts to go to the desires that were created by God, who they ignored unless they saw what they liked from him only. 


You guessed it; it is the devil's world. Some call it the gin’s world, some say it is on your house's roof, some call it Pergamum, some even refer to it as hell. But devils call it Satanville. Stupidiamort is a devil with many grown-up children, except for Titwor, who is still learning in Devil School. There, devils learn from Luxuria, Gula, Avaritia, Desidia, Ira, Invidia, and Avaritio. Titwor  learns how to communicate with the human mind and what makes humans go to hell and how to convince them to make the acts they know it’s wrong by using one of this four emotions desire,fear,pride and pain. Today is his first day as a devil.


" Dad, what was your first whisper?" asked Titwor. 

"Well, it was making a man discriminate against another," answered Stupidiamort. 

"Okay, and what is the worst whisper?" 

"It is to cause a divorce. Today you will whisper to a human. Good luck." 


Titwor embarks on his quest to whisper. He approaches a boy next to his friend who is smoking. 

"Mhm, uhh, ehh, ohhhh, hey, why don't you smoke with your friend?" whispered Titwor. 

"I can't; my father told me not to," replied the boy. 

"But your father cannot see you." 

"God can." 

"Ahh! Stop with this attitude! Okay, you could insult your smoking friend." 

"I could negotiate with him." 

"What is that?" 


"Hey Ramie, stop smoking; you know it will burn your chest or something." After a long discussion, Ramie stopped smoking. 

"Oh no, I failed! Lord MorningStar  will be furious..." So, when Titwor goes to tell his great leader about his work, he feels intimidated by the good work everyone else did except him. Who is his great leader you might ask, it is the original devil they call him lord Morningstar but he is called by many names

Lucifer,Satan,Apollyon,Azazel,the Serpent,Iblis,The tempter,the king of delusions,the father of great lies and the Adversary yes it is he humanities most dangerous enemy of all times the creator of alcohol the first of millions who will enter hell yes it is the Devil

"So, what did you do?" asked lord Morningstar. 

"I... I made someone stop smoking," replied Titwor. 

"This is a failure, and I do not accept that. Go home, and tomorrow you will do better, and that is an order." 


The next day Titwor thought and thought “I must get it right this time but how” said Titwor I know it is so easy to make children lie.

In another place a child was eating too much candy even though his parents told him not to then they asked him “did you eat candy today” “mhhh yahhhh, hello child listen just tell them no I did not if you tell them yes they will punish you and you do not want to get punished” whispered Titwor


-I don’t want to get punished, said the child, but my father told me lying is wrong


-Yes but what other choice you have if you don’t lie to them they will beat you it is not wrong to lie in this cases


-Let me ask my parents.Mum,Dad is it wrong to lie in cases where if you say the truth you get in trouble


-Yes of course, Said his father, if you want to be a good man you must face your fears and do the right thing even when it is hard that is part of our test in life


-Thank you father from now on I will not lie even in these situations.


Not again; my dad will be disappointed in me. Oh no, oh no, no, no. 

And as expected, not only was his father was disappointed, but everyone was disappointed too. He was a disgrace and an embarrassment to his family. People would spit at him, hate him, and Satan would beat him. No matter how much he apologised, he was still despised. 

The next day, he wanted to end the misery, so he went to a king and his queen. 

- "Mohhhh mohhhh rrrrrrrr hhhh, why is your wife so late? Maybe she is cheating on you." 

- "Why were you late, and what were you doing?" said the king. 

- "He does not trust you; he thinks you are a liar," said Titwor to the queen. 

- "Don't you trust me? Stop asking me these things," said the queen to her husband. 

- "She is using trust for lying," said Titwor to the king. 

- "Stop with the trust thing and answer," said the king to his wife. 

- "He will never trust you and never will treat you as the woman who loves him; ask for a divorce," said Titwor to the queen. 

- "Divorce me," said the queen to the king. 

- "If she asks for a divorce because of a simple question, then she could never live with you; do as she asks," said the devil to the king. 

- "I don't want to do that, but it is true," said the king. 

- "Do it," said the devil to the king. 

- "Fine, you are divorced," replied the king to his wife. 

Titwor was happy; all the devils in Satanvil would be proud, so he went to lord Morningstar and told him, "I made two married people divorce, Lord MorningStar " lord Morningstar was proud, so he set a party for him in the White House's bathroom. "Cheers for Titwor!" everyone said. Everyone was happy, but his father was the proudest of all of them. But Titwor felt guilt for what he did, he would not want this for himself so he did not want this for the king.

- "Congratulations, son; you did it," said Titwor's father. 

- "I don't know, Dad; I feel like I did something wrong," answered Titwor. 

- "No, no; you did something right. These humans deserve it." 

- "But why do we make them go to hell with us when we could try to go to heaven?" 

- "You need to be alone for now, I feel." 

- "Yes." 

- "Okay, you are a good devil, Titwor; remember that." 

Titwor decided to fix his mistake. He went back to the king. 

- "Ahhhh noh, oh ho ho oh. Hey, what you did was wrong; it was the devil's work, but you love your wife," said the devil. 

- "No, she is not loyal; I know it." 

Titwor knew that there was no hope for the king, so he went to the queen.

"Okay, ehhhhhh. Go to your husband; he probably misses you. Go and apologise," said Titwor to the former queen. 

- "What am I saying? Apologise? Did I do wrong to apologise?" said the queen. 

- "You did not, but you have to fix things between you and your husband. Plus, you asked for a divorce, and this is a strong word worth apologising for. 

"Yes, I really should apologise." 

Meanwhile, the king was sleeping in his large bed, trying to sleep but unable to stop thinking about how stupid the cause of his divorce was. "What did I do? I ruined my marriage with a patient attitude," said the king to himself. "I just want to sleep," he replied to himself, but he could not sleep. "Aaah!" he shouted. "She is probably, no, she is definitely saying, 'What a man I hate!' Those horrible words—I am called by terrible words that describe me, "the king thought. He got inside his blanket and kept moving as if his nervous system had entered a civil war. He aggressively threw all his pillows on the floor, as if he were defenestrating them. He got out of bed and slumped in his wife's chair like a corpse. He was deeply distressed, but he was not thinking ; he was just repeating in his mind , " No , no! Stop ! Stop! I can't .. . Stop! Why ... Stop?" He went to bed in terror and thought of his parents , but he could not block his horror away from his thoughts , so he screamed. He was so tired but unable to sleep or even talk that he fainted, but that did not prevent him from hiding from his thoughts. He envisioned a man in a red suit who offered him the chance to become a god. He accepted and then became the size of an ant , accompanied by an army of armless ants . He struck at his wife with his god powers , and she shrank to the size of an ant . He fought her without the help of the army ; in the end , he destroyed her , and all the armless ants in his army vanished from existence . At the end of the dream , he realized he did not have any god powers , only weaknesses . Then the man in the red suit came and told him , "Ha ha ha! I won! " The man revealed he was a devil all along and swallowed him. The man fell into his stomach and burned in the fire of hell . Whenever he melted, he would return again , only to melt again . He would be consonant when every cell in his body incinerate . He found a rope , but the devil pulled him , even though he was also in this torture until the man became the divl himself when the torcher was over .

Then he had another dream, but it was a normal dream. Then he finally fell asleep; it was so peaceful . And .. . knock knock! No one interrupted me, said the narrator. it never happened before. 


The man woke up in fear; it was the door. He opened the door to find his wife. 

"I am so sorry; please forgive me," said the former wife. 

"Ehh, you are only saying that to get back to your queen life," answered the king. 

"I am apologising to be with my love, not the king, because there are a lot of kings for no reason, but one man I love for his and my life." 

"Do it," said Titwor to the former queen. 

The woman said, "Would you marry me?" showing a ring made of diamonds. It reminded the king of the first time she proposed to him. 

"Yes," said the king. 

And so the king and his wife got back together and lived happily ever after. 

But Titwor was confused; how is he a devil, and how did he make humans do a good thing? 

He went to a religious jinn but what is a religious jinn you might ask well the jinn are the race of people who could be devils,demons,Jennies or noninterfiring jinn. Devils are the jinn who devote there lives for the purpose of helping The Devil to make all humans go to hell, demons are the jinn who are violent and make trouble, Jinnies are the jinn who do the forbidden and make deals with humans some say demons come from hell and noninterfiring jinn are the ones who don’t interfere in human afresh most of them do that because it is against there religion but some are atheist who don’t do that just because they don’t want to so a religious jinn is a noninterfiring jinn who is faithful to his religion jinns have many religions because just like us God sent them profits to tell them the orders of God and they have only one human profit some people don’t believe that this human profit is actually a messenger of God but the religious jinn in are story believes that God actually sent a human profit to the jinn.Titwar told his story to the religious jinn. 

“All of us have the choice” said the jinn “and now you have to take the most difficult choice of all times, do you want to enter hell”

“I don’t know” said Titwor “My father always told me that we enter hell sacrifice to are revenge to humans and the one above all”

“You will go hell for all infinity just for revenge don’t you want to go to heaven and why are you taking revenge Adam never harmed you and God is always right so entering hell has no meaning in your case or in any other case”

“ You are right I don’t need to go to hell I just have to trust the orders of the righteous one of all he is always right so when he ordered Morningstar to do stuff Morningstar didn’t want to do God was the right one since he can’t make mistakes,but what will my father think?" 

"Treat him well but never be a devil like him." 

"You are right; I will go tell my family right now." 

Titwor went immediately to his house before the jinn warned him of the danger he would face. 

"Dad, Dad!" said Titwor. 

"What is it?" said his dad. 

"I am a nice devil." 

"What?" 

"I will be loyal to God, who is not Satan“.

"Ahhh! What did I do wrong to get such a disappointment?"

Titwor was shocked by his father's painful words. 

Knock, knock, and knock! 

The door opened without Stupidiamort touching it. It was Lord Morningstar. 

"Where is Titwor?" said Lord Morningstar. 

"Eh?" 

Morningstar pushed Stupidiamort aside and grabbed Titwor by his horns. 

"I was proud of you, but you took it all," said the Devil. 

"But we could be loyal to God," said Titwor. 

" Aaaaaaaaaaah! Stop it! Yuuahhhhääâaaä! I will execute you!" 

"No!" said Stupidiamort, but he could not do anything. 

Titwor spent time in prison while awaiting his execution, sharing his story with his cellmate. They became friends. 

But it was soon to end because it was execution day. 

"Titwor, goodbye," said his friend. 

"Nice knowing you, Amel," said Titwor. 

Before his execution, seven devils sang the story of Adam from the devil's point of view. “It all began with God creating a dirty creature owt of mood called human but the light bringer lord Morningstar are hero stood tall and brave he hade dignity and refused to kneel for such thing and got pushed but in honor and dignity on like this angels”.One second before his execution, an arrow was shot at the rope holding Titwor's neck, causing him to fall. He fell so hard that he lost consciousness. He woke up in his brother's house. 

"What happened?" asked Titwor. 

"I saved your life; that's what happened," said Titwor's brother. 

" But why?" 

"I thought about what you said, and I hate to say it, but you are right. I don't want to suffer for eternity. I want to go to heaven, but the problem is that God promised we will all go to hell. 


- No, God is nice; He would not punish you for someone else's actions. The religion Jin told me that we are free to do what we want; we are not forced to go to hell.


- Then my family and I will do what you say.


- That is the spirit!


- What are you going to do?


- To The Morningstar ; he must not have the chance to stop me from talking.


- Are you crazy? He is the most powerful devil of Satanvil!


- But together we have a chance—a small chance, but a chance nonetheless.


Titwor and his brother's family went back to Satanvil in disguise. "So what now?" asked Titwor's brother. Titwor pointed at Lord Morningstar’s citadel ,also known as Venus. We are all going to die, thought Titwor's brother, but he trusted his brother anyway. When they arrived, Titwor said, "One of us must bring to Satan devil smoke juice—or, as humans call it, alcohol—with a hypnotic in it. One person must distract the real devil, who will be serving him the devil smoke juice."


So Titwor's brother entered the citadel disguised as a historian. Historians enter the citadel all the time for information. The brother left the door open for Titwor to get in.


- What kind of information do you want from me? said Lord Morningstar.


- I want to know about, uh, well, you see, I want to learn about this point in the timeline of history, specifically about that devil called, uh, can I have a cup of devil smoke juice, please, Your Highness?


- Okay, why not, but please talk fast; I am really busy.


- Sure thing, sir.


Satan ordered two drinks and then looked at the brother.


- So?


- So what? 


- So what do you want?


- Ahhh, yeah, I remember, yeah, yeah, I wanted to know about, um...


- What, you forgot?


- No, I want to know about the library.


- Oh, the drinks are here. 


Satan drank and drank. Luckily, Titwor's brother knew a lot of jokes, so he took the opportunity to pass the time until the Satan fell asleep.


"Finally," said Titwor's brother after Satan fell asleep, and then he heard his brother saying, "Run!" So he did as he heard until he got out of the citadel and found his brother. 


"We did it," the older brother said.


"Not yet," Titwor said. "We still need to gather all the devils of Satanvil."

And so Titwor and his brother gathered all the devils.


-“A devils of Satanvil today I gathered you to rethink the principles of our society”said Titwor “Why do we whisper to humans

-“to make them pay” said a random

-“But at what cost, are we truly destined in this pass”

-“It’s the sacrifice of revenge” said another random devil

-There are two possibilities that could prove this right one that it’s the sacrifice of revenge just like you said but God maid hell and if he made hell then it’s impossible to not regret being in it since god serves his purpose exactly the way he wants it and don’t forget we will all be fully sentient in hell for all eternity so maybe it’s because God made a mistake when he created Adam well in that case shouldn’t we sur h for the real god who makes no mistakes instead of westing are time but we all agree that the creature of Adam is God he who is always right  then in that case God was right!


“I mean he doth have a point” some devil thought, “but this is wrong devils have bin doing thing for generations we can’t just stop now” a devil said

“If are ancestors did wrong stuff why should stop now to not make are children do this things” said Titwor.


When some devils began thinking about it Satan came with many guards and security hell hounds

“Well,well,well,if it isn’t that nice devil, let me guess your telling them how evil I am and how right was God”said the Devil.


-“Actually no I was not talking about you but I was saying god was right though ”said Titwor.

-“Well I can’t let you say such thing to my devils your insulting the roots of our culture”said the Devil

-“Well it’s there liberty to choose if they don’t want to be devils what if it’s wrong than they keep doing something wrong for many years if it’s wrong than that possibility must proven wrong or right we are taking about hell here”

-leave them alone there happy going to hell I mean what evil have we devils done in are life, what did we do that was so bad that the wold devil became an insult in a way I never killed I,never stole,I never kidnapped and I never hade any premarital se….”

-“Ok I get it”


-“The person you should be blaming is  there the ones who make all this horrible things, I only give advices, you don’t like these than don’t listen to me but if you do than your’r the one doing wrong not me”


-“But you know that God doth not approve that”


-“I will go to hell because I challenged him and disobeyed him but not because I am the original devil, but I admire your righteousness must be so hard go threw that pass if only everyone was like you.”


-“We can all be righteousness you don’t have to admire me and encourage others to go to hell. We all just have to open are harts to humans and give the respect you can give the the Almighty.”


-“Very good talk, ok we devils respect all lot people you. Now it's time to go home, it’s getting dark. I mean you respect God and you don’t sleep on bedtime.



And so The Devil’s guards brought Titwor and Everyone else back to there houses and from this day all plays and stories contain amnesia excessive amount of devilry that any one against devilry would not find any character to admire or at least not to hate so the nice devils made there own media that depicts devils cruel and hollow hatred so the devils said “stop it what is wrong to you is not wrong for everyone else” “there is no wright and wrong every one doth what he want” “liberty ““You are racist I was born devilish” or other formed of rubbish non-sense that sounded like Spence unlit you start thinking. In the end the shark teeth of judgments day gives no mercy in who insists of becoming of it’s victims.


By Omar Sohail Mayada 

 
 
 

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